translation help?

2Mar2008 Filed under: Air Conditioner Author: admin

Ya-chi asked:

I have a translation assignment that is air conditioner’s DM. I have to translate it from Chinese to English. I’ve wrote something down, and I hope someone would check the translation and give me some advice. Thank you a lot.
Window Mounted Air Conditioner
Features:
“Swallow”, the CKT-3A window mounted air conditioner is the equipment of heat pump system, which could maintain room temperature for human comfort mechanically. Nice quality and smoothly working make you feel quiet and comfortable.
The group of product equips four-way reversing valve, two-speed fan, and fresh air equipment, which apply to winter and summer. When it is working, this product would renew fresh air, remove dust, and absorb humidity in the air, for providing a nicer life and work environment. Plus, the CKT-3A window mounted air conditioner is installed the self-designed hermetic compressor, and have the strength of nice structure, high efficiency, ultraquiet operation, and high quality of performance.

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One Response to “translation help?”

mel_70
March 3rd, 2008 at 12:49 pm

I’ve put my changes in capital letters for you. I hope this helps. It was a little difficult because of the technical language.

“Swallow” the CKT-3A window mounted air conditioner HAS HEAT PUMP SYSTEM EQUIPMENT, which CAN MECHANICALLY maintain room temperature for human comfort. HIGH quality and SMOOTH OPERATION MAKES you feel RELAXED and comfortable. The PRODUCT CONTAINS four-way reversing VALVES, two-speed fan, and fresh air equipment, which apply to BOTH winter and summer. When it is working, this product would renew fresh air, remove dust, and absorb humidity in the air TO PROVIDE a BETTER LIVING and work environment. Plus, the CKT-3A window mounted air conditioner is installed WITH the self-designed hermetic compressor, and HAS the strength of a FINE structure, high efficiency, ultra quiet operation, and high quality of performance.